I'm glad you guys liked it! I had a hard time deciding whether or not I should post it, but now I'm happy that I did.
Janet, I wrote it yesterday mostly during class. I just couldn't concentrate because all those thoughts were going through my head, so I started writing. (I know, I'm a bad student, lol!) I had to stop half way through because we ended up doing an in class activity so I finished it last night before bed.