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Old 02-06-2008, 09:49 PM   #1
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My thoughts

strongly yearning, heart burning
for something to change
in a troubled world
where voices remain unheard
nothing more than soft whispers
in a whirlwind of fear
and shame and doubt.
struggling to be noticed
among the others
speaking truth
wanting peace
hoping for change
but controlling nothing
---too many voices,
and mine,
Mine is lost in the crowd
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Old 02-07-2008, 03:30 AM   #2
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That is beautiful Angie..did you write it?
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Old 02-07-2008, 04:24 AM   #3
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Awww, Angie, beautiful poem. You're not lost in the crowd. We hear you!!
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Old 02-07-2008, 06:57 AM   #4
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Angie, what a sweet poem. I think that is how so many of us feel, as though our voices are lost in the crowd. Thank goodness that God can hear us no matter who else is talking!!! Thanks for sharing!!
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Old 02-07-2008, 08:13 AM   #5
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I'm glad you guys liked it! I had a hard time deciding whether or not I should post it, but now I'm happy that I did.

Janet, I wrote it yesterday mostly during class. I just couldn't concentrate because all those thoughts were going through my head, so I started writing. (I know, I'm a bad student, lol!) I had to stop half way through because we ended up doing an in class activity so I finished it last night before bed.
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Old 02-07-2008, 08:48 AM   #6
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Wow Angie that Is Wonderful. Touching.
I also Write Poetry. I have not written anything in a few Years though.
Maybe I should start up again.
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