I need opinions..

cindy0721 · 03-26-2007, 10:55 AM

I am writing this paper for my college english class on animal rights and wanted to see if anyone here would mind giving me their feedback? It is just maybe 2 paragraphs... still a work in progress but I need some feedback to see if I am on the right track... let me know & I will email you what I have so far! Thanks!!

Janet · 03-26-2007, 01:01 PM

I don't know much on animal rights to be able to give you an honest opinion as far as an english paper. I mean I have my opinion on how animals should be treated, so if you want my opinion, I'll PM you my email address.

Chandra Amaya · 03-26-2007, 08:36 PM

You can send it to me. I know some about animal rights & I made an A in english comp I & II.

cindy0721 · 03-27-2007, 08:30 AM

ok ladies... thanks!

rivermom · 03-27-2007, 10:22 AM

I am sure your paper will turn out wonderful. Like Janet said, I too am not totally familiar with all the animal rights etc. Just have opinions and not sure if those are what your truly need in your writing assignment.

I bet you'll get a big red "A" on your paper! Good luck!

cindy0721 · 03-27-2007, 10:23 AM

thanks sheryl.....

AngieDoogles · 03-27-2007, 10:45 AM

I don't know much about animal rights either, other than opinion, but I am very good with grammar and format (learning a second language really helps with that). When you are closer to being finished, I wouldn't mind checking all of that kind of stuff for you if you'd like.

Good luck. Like the others have said, I'm sure you will get an A!

Marilyn · 03-27-2007, 06:18 PM

I'll try to get my daughter, Melissa (Lissa) back on here. She's really good at writing, and probably knows quite a bit on your topic. She's nuts over all kinds of animals.

Lissa · 03-27-2007, 06:23 PM

I was an English major for a little while so you could send me a copy and I'll look it over

Janet · 03-28-2007, 04:11 AM

Don't know when your paper is due, but I hope you get an 'A' on it.

03-26-2007, 10:55 AM	#1
cindy0721 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Lone Star State Posts: 389	I need opinions.. I am writing this paper for my college english class on animal rights and wanted to see if anyone here would mind giving me their feedback? It is just maybe 2 paragraphs... still a work in progress but I need some feedback to see if I am on the right track... let me know & I will email you what I have so far! Thanks!! __________________ Cindy " My mechanic told me, "I couldn't repair your brakes, so I made your horn louder."

03-26-2007, 01:01 PM	#2
Janet Moderator Donating 4WT 18K Club Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: INDIANA Posts: 21,624	I don't know much on animal rights to be able to give you an honest opinion as far as an english paper. I mean I have my opinion on how animals should be treated, so if you want my opinion, I'll PM you my email address. __________________ To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven. ECCLESIASTES 3:1

03-26-2007, 08:36 PM	#3
Chandra Amaya 4WT 500 Club Member Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Tn Posts: 1,646	You can send it to me. I know some about animal rights & I made an A in english comp I & II. __________________ Traci

03-27-2007, 08:30 AM	#4
cindy0721 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Lone Star State Posts: 389	ok ladies... thanks! __________________ Cindy " My mechanic told me, "I couldn't repair your brakes, so I made your horn louder."

03-27-2007, 10:22 AM	#5
rivermom Donating 4WT 500 Club Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Tontitown, Arkansas Posts: 2,475	I am sure your paper will turn out wonderful. Like Janet said, I too am not totally familiar with all the animal rights etc. Just have opinions and not sure if those are what your truly need in your writing assignment. I bet you'll get a big red "A" on your paper! Good luck! __________________ ~_/> , /\/\ ,,, Sheryl When I grow up I want to be a horse whisperer!

03-27-2007, 10:23 AM	#6
cindy0721 Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: Lone Star State Posts: 389	thanks sheryl..... __________________ Cindy " My mechanic told me, "I couldn't repair your brakes, so I made your horn louder."

03-27-2007, 10:45 AM	#7
AngieDoogles Donating 4WT 4000 Club Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Posts: 6,509	I don't know much about animal rights either, other than opinion, but I am very good with grammar and format (learning a second language really helps with that). When you are closer to being finished, I wouldn't mind checking all of that kind of stuff for you if you'd like. Good luck. Like the others have said, I'm sure you will get an A! __________________ "Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream. Discover." ~MT

03-27-2007, 06:18 PM	#8
Marilyn Donating 4WT 2000 Club Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: South Texas Posts: 4,907	I'll try to get my daughter, Melissa (Lissa) back on here. She's really good at writing, and probably knows quite a bit on your topic. She's nuts over all kinds of animals. __________________ Marilyn If anyone would like a free Bible Study CD or book entitled "Searching for Truth", PM me with your mailing address and I'll send you one. "And you shall know the truth and the truth shall set you free." John 8:32

03-27-2007, 06:23 PM	#9
Lissa Senior Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: South and Central Texas Posts: 337	I was an English major for a little while so you could send me a copy and I'll look it over __________________ Marilyn's Disappearing Daughter!! Cake or Death, Melissa "Therefore do not throw away your confidence, which has a great reward. For you have need of endurance, so that when you have done the will of God you may receive what is promised." Heb 10:35-36

03-28-2007, 04:11 AM	#10
Janet Moderator Donating 4WT 18K Club Member Join Date: Sep 2006 Location: INDIANA Posts: 21,624	Don't know when your paper is due, but I hope you get an 'A' on it. __________________ To every thing there is a season, and a time to every purpose under the heaven. ECCLESIASTES 3:1

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