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Old 04-17-2008, 03:47 AM   #1
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Daddy's Poem

Daddy's Poem

Her hair was up in a pony tail,

her favorite dress tied with a bow.

Today was Daddy's Day at school,

and she couldn't wait to go.

But her mommy tried to tell her,

that she probably should stay home

Why the kids might not understand,

if she went to school alone.

But she was not afraid;

she knew just what to say.

What to tell her classmates

of why he wasn't there today.

But still her mother worried,

for her to face this day alone.

And that was why once again,

she tried to keep her daughter home.

But the little girl went to school

eager to tell them all.

About a dad she never sees

a dad who never calls.

There were daddies along the wall in back,

for everyone to meet.

Children squirming impatiently,

anxious in their seats

One by one the teacher called

a student from the class.

To introduce their daddy,

as seconds slowly passed.

At last the teacher called her name,

every child turned to stare.

Each of them was searching,

a man who wasn't there.

'Where's her daddy at?'

She heard a boy call out.

'She probably doesn't have one,'

another student dared to shout.

And from somewhere near the back,

she heard a daddy say,

'Looks like another deadbeat dad,

too busy to waste his day.'

The words did not offend her,

as she smiled up at her Mom.

And looked back at her teacher,

who told her to go on.

And with hands behind her back,

slowly she began to speak.

And out from the mouth of a child,

came words incredibly unique.

'My Daddy couldn't be here,

because he lives so far away.

But I know he wishes he could be,

since this is such a special day.

And though you cannot meet him,

I wanted you to know.

All about my daddy,

and how much he loves me so.

He loved to tell me stories

he taught me to ride my bike.

He surprised me with pink roses,

and taught me to fly a kite.

We used to share fudge sundaes,

and ice cream in a cone.

And though you cannot see him.

I'm not standing here alone.

'Cause my daddy's always with me,

even though we are apart

I know because he told me,

he'll forever be in my heart'

With that, her little hand reached up,

and lay across her chest.

Feeling her own heartbeat,

beneath her favorite dress.

And from somewhere there

in the crowd of dads,

her mother stood in tears.

Proudly watching her daughter,

who was wise beyond her years.

For she stood up for the love

of a man not in her life.

Doing what was best for her,

doing what was right.

And when she dropped her hand back down,

staring straight into the crowd.

She finished with a voice so soft,

but its message clear and loud.

'I love my daddy very much,

he's my shining star.

And if he could, he'd be here,

but heaven's just too far.

You see he is a Marine

and died just this past year

When a roadside bomb hit his convoy

and taught Americans to fear.

But sometimes when I close my eyes,

it's like he never went away.'

And then she closed her eyes,

and saw him there that day.

And to her mother's amazement,

she witnessed with surprise.

A room full of daddies and children,

all starting to close their eyes.

Who knows what they saw before them,

who knows what they felt inside.

Perhaps for merely a second,

they saw him at her side.

'I know you're with me Daddy,'

to the silence she called out.

And what happened next made believers,

of those once filled with doubt.

Not one in that room could explain it,

for each of their eyes had been closed.

But there on the desk beside her,

was a fragrant long-stemmed pink rose.

And a child was blessed,

if only for a moment,

by the love of her shining star.

And given the gift of believing,

that heaven is never too far.

They say it takes a minute to find a special person, an hour to
appreciate them, a day to love them, but then
an entire life to forget them.

Take the time...to live and love.
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Old 04-17-2008, 03:51 AM   #2
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That is so great Haley. I just hope I have made good memories in my children's life they will cry with them forever.
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Old 04-17-2008, 03:56 AM   #3
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I love that poem, sometimes you don't think children are watching or paying attention to you, but there like a sponge they absorb everything you say and do no matter how young they are, I truly believe that.
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Old 04-17-2008, 06:25 AM   #4
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That was nice Haley, thanks for sharing it with us.
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Old 04-17-2008, 03:39 PM   #5
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That was so sweet. Our soldiers pay a high price to fight for our freedoms. What father wants to leave his children? Very touching!
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Old 04-17-2008, 06:26 PM   #6
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That was so sweet. Our soldiers pay a high price to fight for our freedoms. What father wants to leave his children? Very touching!
Well Diana makes you really upset with the women and men who leave their children just because they don't want the responsibility doesn't it? They just walk away and then people like this Dad don't get the chance to watch their child grow up.
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Old 04-17-2008, 08:28 PM   #7
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Haley, that was beautiful.........
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Old 04-18-2008, 05:52 AM   #8
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Thank you Haley. That was a tear maker for sure.
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Old 04-18-2008, 05:54 AM   #9
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Yes it was Judy, i just hope my son loves me that much !
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Well Diana makes you really upset with the women and men who leave their children just because they don't want the responsibility doesn't it? They just walk away and then people like this Dad don't get the chance to watch their child grow up.
Exactly! I'm in tears after reading this. I know a few "father's' who should read this and be grateful that they had the chance. It is sad that they father's who want to be there for their children sometimes never get the chance, but those given the chance do not take it. My daughter has come up with a song that she wishes for her dad to hear. I wish that every deadbeat dad could read this story and hear this song and become the fathers that their children need and be thankful every day for it.
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Old 04-20-2008, 01:44 PM   #11
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That is so great Haley. I just hope I have made good memories in my children's life they will cry with them forever.
I just noticed the mistake I made in this post--I want mike kids to "carry" their memories with them-I don't want my kids to cry-guess I need to check my post more.
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I just noticed the mistake I made in this post--I want mike kids to "carry" their memories with them-I don't want my kids to cry-guess I need to check my post more.
I was a little confused when I first read it, but I figured you meant 'carry'

Good song Traci, I cried through the whole thing.
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Old 04-21-2008, 01:18 PM   #13
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Today is my Daddy's birthday. He passed away about 12 years ago at the age of 81. So he would have been 93 today.

He was a really good Father!

I love you Daddy.
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I know you still miss him Judy. I am glad you have good memories to cherish.
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Old 04-21-2008, 02:47 PM   #15
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Today is my Daddy's birthday. He passed away about 12 years ago at the age of 81. So he would have been 93 today.

He was a really good Father!

I love you Daddy.
I'm so sorry Judy. Like Mom said, I'm glad you have good memories of him.
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