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11-15-2007, 10:59 AM
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Stela
This one's new - a draft - what do you think?
Stela Caged gray words a smooth white mask shrouded, scarred visage disfigured, twisted fragments of face stitched together, a fierce map where ancient griefs traverse gnarled hills, roughly threaded roads salty rivulets, gullied culverts torrents coalesce, cascade the storm-dark sea. Katherine A Minden 2007 |
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11-15-2007, 11:05 AM
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Donating 4WT Yakker
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Stela's not a happy camper!
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11-15-2007, 04:45 PM
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No - she's not! It's a play on the word a stela or stelae is a standing stone with ancient writing on it. It had more to it at first but it (the poem) kept insisting that it didn't want the excess verbiage. That Stela has a mind of her own!
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