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03-26-2007, 10:55 AM
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I need opinions..
I am writing this paper for my college english class on animal rights and wanted to see if anyone here would mind giving me their feedback? It is just maybe 2 paragraphs... still a work in progress but I need some feedback to see if I am on the right track... let me know & I will email you what I have so far! Thanks!!
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03-26-2007, 01:01 PM
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I don't know much on animal rights to be able to give you an honest opinion as far as an english paper. I mean I have my opinion on how animals should be treated, so if you want my opinion, I'll PM you my email address.
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03-26-2007, 08:36 PM
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You can send it to me. I know some about animal rights & I made an A in english comp I & II.
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03-27-2007, 08:30 AM
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ok ladies... thanks!
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03-27-2007, 10:22 AM
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I am sure your paper will turn out wonderful. Like Janet said, I too am not totally familiar with all the animal rights etc. Just have opinions and not sure if those are what your truly need in your writing assignment.
I bet you'll get a big red "A" on your paper! Good luck! 
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03-27-2007, 10:23 AM
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thanks sheryl.....
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03-27-2007, 10:45 AM
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I don't know much about animal rights either, other than opinion, but I am very good with grammar and format (learning a second language really helps with that). When you are closer to being finished, I wouldn't mind checking all of that kind of stuff for you if you'd like.
Good luck. Like the others have said, I'm sure you will get an A!
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03-27-2007, 06:18 PM
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I'll try to get my daughter, Melissa (Lissa) back on here. She's really good at writing, and probably knows quite a bit on your topic. She's nuts over all kinds of animals.
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03-27-2007, 06:23 PM
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I was an English major for a little while so you could send me a copy and I'll look it over
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03-28-2007, 04:11 AM
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Don't know when your paper is due, but I hope you get an 'A' on it.
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