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11-11-2008, 04:19 PM
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Donating 4WT Yakker
Join Date: Jan 2007
Location: Denver, NY
Posts: 8,097
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It is beautiful. I love the "The harmony of love meets with the melody
of life." "joining the reverie of captivating images and compositions of the tranquil sea" is also beautiful, but doesn't relate to getting married like the beginning does. But, if you keep it the way it is, it is very lovely.
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